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Thus discourse is defined as a goal-oriented activity where the goals are reached by providing information in units called points. Points are related to each other by conjunctions (truth-functional words, such as and and or).
Conjunctive adverbials may express, for example, an inferential relationship (therefore), temporal ordering (afterwards), contrast (on the other hand), and paradox (yet ). The conjunctive adverbial is placed before one point, called the POSTJUNCT. The point or points that precede it are called the PREJUNCT. The prejunct and the postjunct are known collectively as CONJUNCTS.
Table 1. Summary of Additive Meanings Info. Relev. Only Only Works Connective binary? Indep.? Indep? reasons? criteria? with or? _____________________________________________________________________________ also o o o o o o furthermore o + o o o o besides + + + + o o moreover + o o o o o in addition o + + o o o what is more o o o + + + to top it off o o o o + o on top of that o o o o + oI will now discuss three of the additives, moreover, besides, and what's more.
Example of type (1):
Mary's friends all know her as a person of great creativity. [What's so creative about her?] [1] For one thing, she is a very talented painter. Moreover, [2] some of her paintings have won national awards.
Example of type (2):
[Is geometry still useful?] [1] Geometry still possesses all those virtues that the educators ascribed to it a generation ago. There is still geometry in nature, waiting to be recognized and appreciated. Geometry (especially projective ge ometry) is still an excellent means of introducing the student to axiomatics. It still possesses the esthetic appeal it always had, and the beauty of its results has not diminished. [2] Moreover, it is even more useful and necessary to the scientist and practical mathematician than it has ever been. Consider, for instance, the shapes of the orbits of artificial satellites, and the four-dimensional geometry of the space-time continuum. (Coxeter & Greitzer, Geometry Revisited)
(support of evaluation: incorrect)
*What a frightful storm! [What's so frightful about it?] There are gale force winds, and besides, there's vicious thunder and lightning.
(support of modal statement: correct)
You mustn't you go outside! There are gale force winds, and besides, there's vicious thunder and lightning.
The following examples illustrate the independence of information requirement of besides. First, read the following example, understanding a context where the listener knows nothing about Mary.
You're bound to like Mary. [1] She is a very talented musician. Besides, [2] she's got a great personality.
First we note that [1] and [2] are reasons in support of the modal statement which they are supporting (``you're bound to like Mary''). Next, we note that points [1] and [2] are informationally independent. Information about a person's talent at music tells us nothing about that person's personality. Furthermore, they are relevance independent, since you can like someone solely for their musicianship without regard to personality, and you can like someone solely for their personality without regard to their musicianship.
Now notice how when we change the second sentence but slightly and make it informationally dependent on the first, we no longer have Good English:
*You're bound to like Mary. [1] She is a very talented musician.Point [2] contains information given in [1], namely that Mary is a musician. If we take `musician' to mean `someone who can play songs' then [2] carries part of the information of [1], namely, that Mary is a musician. Using besides here is tantamount to claiming that one can play songs without being a musician. Notice that if we change to a context where the fact that Mary is a musician is known, and all that is being informed about her by [1] is that she is talented, then the sequence [1] [2] can be linked by besides much more felicitously:Besides, [2] she plays songs that she's written herself.
Mary is certain to win the Guitar-Vocalist of the Year award. [1] She is a very talented musician. Besides, [2] she plays songs that she's written herself.
This passage has resolved the essential contradiction of its predecessor, but by virtue of besides, it still makes some at least debatable assertions. One thing we must infer from the passage is that the ability to play one's own songs should not be understood as constituting talent, if [2] is to be informationally independent of [1]. The information that Mary is talented must therefore be information about something other than composing ability. Furthermore, there is relevance independence to take into consideration. The above passage asserts that being a very talented musician will assure you top prize as even if you can't play your own songs, and, conversely, you can win top prize by playing your own songs even if you aren't very talented.
Like moreover, besides connects pairs; it does not cap off a list. This fact may be obscured by the possibility of adding an alternate reason to a reason which happens to be a list of reasons. Compare (with apologies to Al Franken):
I deserve the best. I'm good enough, I'm smart enough and besides, people like me.I deserve the best. I'm good enough, I'm smart enough, and furthermore, people like me.
[Evaluation: Darwin is anti-theistic]The literature of Darwinism is full of anti-theistic conclusions, such as that the universe was not designed and has no purpose, and that we humans are the product of blind natural processes that care nothing about us. What is more, these statements are not presented as personal opinions but as the logical implications of evolutionary science. (Phillip E. Johnson, Darwin on Trial)
[Evaluation: Southern leaders have made something great]
There is no doubt that Jefferson Davis and other leaders of the South have made an army; they are making, it appears, a navy; and they have made, what is more than either, they have made a nation.... (Henry Adams, Education of Henry Adams )
[Evaluation: The opinion of the English at large was similar to Chamberlain's]
In spite of the campaigns of a few thousand left-wingers, it is fairly certain that the bulk of the English people were behind Chamberlain's foreign policy. More, it is fairly certain that the same struggle was going on in Chamberlain's mind as in the minds of ordinary people. (George Orwell)
Importantly, like besides, what is more does not join points in substantiation of a generalization.
(criteria in support of evaluation: correct)
What a frightful storm! [What's so frightful about it?] There are gale force winds, and what's more, there's vicious thunder and lightning.
Carrots are so versatile! They can be steamed as well as fried. And what's more they can be grated and put into a salad.
(facts supporting a generalization: incorrect)
*Carrots can be prepared in a number of ways. They can be steamed as well as fried.Since a position often hinges on the validity of an evaluation, what's more often appears in contexts where a position is supported:What's more, they can be grated and put into a salad.
Don't go outside! [G:Why shouldn't you? = What's so dangerous about it out there?] There are gale force winds, and what's more, there's vicious thunder and lightning.